Yr1:Life Drawing - week2

So after 3 years of life drawing and becoming an extra life addict, there comes a time in your life when the teacher says "I love your style and how expressive it is, but it's not gonna work" time to learn how to use lines instead of mass.... this is gonna be fun! here's my attempt at cleaning up and making it work.... lets hope these are the worst of the bunch it it all goes up hill from here